Reading your poem was quite a surprise!
Your airplane ticket dates, would you like to revise?

I'm sorry the situation is so terrible,
hopefully your other accommodations will be bearable.

And if it helps you feel less pain,
just imagine me suffering (instead of you) under mom's reign ;)

(July 2014; written by Moae)

Bri Edwards

http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/stepdaughter-s-response-my-stepdaughter-s-poem-response-to-my-poem-bri-s-forced-visit-to-the-finger-lakes-sept-2014-personal-very-short-humor/