Miroslava Odalovic dilemma faced said
'still one poem in serbian i am wrestling
with not even dreaming of translating,
it's nothing like a whooosh poem,
but i wish to see it breathe rhythmically,
it's choking there and i feel helpless'

Terence Craddock replied
breathe life love into it
kiss it with lips of time


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